I read this story and i didn't really enjoy it. I don't think it was descriptive enough. And it wasn't realistic to me. I think that readers get into a story like they are there when they are reading. And this story doesn't allow you to do that. it just jumps around from thing to thing, without closing the last setting. It doesn't give the characters ages or anything. So i give it a overall rating of 2 for terrible.
Shayanne Moss
age 16
San Francisco, Ca
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